Album cover ideas

What I need to do next

The next scene of my music video will be at the beach on a winters day, below is a list of things i need to do to prepare for the next scene.

• I need to get all the boys together to decide a time and date to go to the beach
• I need to think of transport, how we will all get to the beach
• I need to think about what costume i would like my characters to wear for this scene
• I need to think about if i need any other props or characters for the next scene
• Because a lot of the next scene is instrumental and not much singing i need to think about what i want the characters to be doing while they aren't singing.
• Linking back to my audience feedback, i need to think about how i am going to use a bigger variety of shots and how i am going to make the characters make more eye contact with the camera.

Audience Feedback

I showed my music video to a number of people in my class and asked them to give me feedback on my video so far and this is what they came up with.

Positive Feedback:

• Very good lip syncing
• Good variety of shots, variety of angles
• Very good costume
• Costume and props represent the genre well
• Clear boyband genre
• Very good eye contact with the camera 
• Good emotional facial expressions
• Stuck the the boyband genre well
• Very good framing in most of the shots
• The sepia and black and white effects work well
• Good transitions between shots

Negative Feedback:

• Need more locations
• More variety in the length of shots. e.g. extreme close up, long shot
• Framing is poor in some of the shots. e.g. cutting half of the character off
• More eye contact with the camera would be better
• Get the characters to do more, not just sit and sing

I will take all this feedback on board and take it into account when i go out to film the next scene of my music video.

My music video so far